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Spring Fling by ~untamedclare:iconuntamedclare:

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Last Spring I had a fling with you,
In fact it lasted all year.
The moment I first heard your voice
Everything seemed clear.
I had to crawl out of the shadows,
Where I have been hiding so long,
I had to enter the seasons sunlight.
Be reborn.
Grow strong.

And there began a sweet romance
Music pumped through veins like blood,
Awakening my dormant soul,
Inducing me to fall in love
With music, sound, voices,
That called to me through the dark.
That set my mind into motion
And begun the quickened beating of my heart.

So I thank you for pulling me
From the dark winter of my soul,
Into spring,
Where I am now blossoming
On my own.
©2005-2009 ~untamedclare
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Author's Comments

For ~therasmus Spring Fling contest. Its not too serious, a bit of fun about just sort of how I felt last year when I started listening to The Rasmus. I'd been really depressed and resigned to failure for so long and I listened to their music and it picked me up. Waiting for the gigs gave me something to look forward to, to be happy about. Their music inspired me to get up and do something with my life. So here's just a little glimpse into that.

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~therasmus Mar 9, 2005, 10:30:56 AM
very awesome! our first poetic entry! :whoot:
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~LauriLover86 Mar 9, 2005, 11:24:35 AM
Oh this so seriously deserves to win! XD I know this all ready because I know how that feels...*+fav* For sure!

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Pecan Pie...
Only Goblin Kings should Sparkle.
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~bittersweet-pen Mar 9, 2005, 1:27:53 PM
Hey that's nice and original :3 It's Springy and Flingy :nod:
I like this and its meaning :nod: Best of Luck!
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~untamedclare Mar 10, 2005, 3:48:15 AM
Hmm it looks a bit lonely all on it's lonesome though, the only poem. Maybe someone else should have a bash at a poem so it doesn't get teased by the other entries lol.
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~untamedclare Mar 10, 2005, 3:51:57 AM
I'm not sure about it deserving to win, but I'm glad someone feels the same way I do. Thanks for the :+fav: :blushes:
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~therasmus Mar 11, 2005, 12:40:04 PM
aww well you can also submit as many as you like too! We don't have any qualms about that! We're also hoping for a few fanfictions and photo minips as well for whoever's willing to break out of the "drawing only" mindset! :)
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~SYDNEY-SPARROW Nov 30, 2008, 8:54:16 AM
ditto on the arty comment there

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no one gives a shit coz everyones a hypocrite
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